Sunday, August 26, 2007

SIBERIAN TIGER (Persuasive Writing)

SIBERIAN TIGER
(Maria Paula and Erica's Exposition)


How do you prefer them, like a purse or like a beautiful living been in a wild? Maria Paula did this sensitive question in her exposition about the Siberian Tiger. Nowadays, many people don’t take conscience about the endangered animals, especially Siberian Tiger, who is one of the most beautiful and important animal into the wild. Approximately there are only about 20 Siberian tigers left in the wild in China, and around 100 live in Chinese zoos and animal parks. Can you imagine how many are in the world? A better way to control this situation is that government makes extremely laws to protect all of animals against Whoever wants to kill them by business.

The Siberian Tiger is important to the environment, because it cleans the forest to other animals, if we don’t have Siberian Tiger in the world; perhaps, wherever you’ll go, the ecosystem is going to be affected. Suppose that government makes extremely laws such as life sentences whoever connected to illegal animals market, hunt, alternative medicine with animals, etc, maybe, these kinds of laws help to take conscience about the reality that we’re living.

Some organizations like Species Survive Plan (SSP) and the convention on International trade in endangered species of wild, fauna and flora. (CITES) are trying to save the Siberian Tiger, but the majority of people in the world don’t know about these organizations, a good example is Colombia, people don’t have conscience about this issue, because there are few information in media. However, If the government actives the law, people would have conscience and responsibility, because now, it’s not about if you want to take care the animals, but, it’s about you have to take care them by the health of the planet.

Do you think if the government doesn’t make extremely laws, people will take care the animals, in this situation Siberian Tigers? I think that sometimes we need extremely laws to learn to take conscience about a reality that the majority of people ignore.

N= Grammar (noun clauses with whenever and whoever)

  1. Introduction
  2. First Argument
  3. Second argument
  4. Conclution

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